Whilst this is nicely presented and detailed, it does not reflect the family dynamics revealed in the hot-seating. Nor does it develop Gary's character as a photography returning from tough overseas assignments, a trouble man. This would benefit from an edit.
Whilst this is nicely presented and detailed, it does not reflect the family dynamics revealed in the hot-seating. Nor does it develop Gary's character as a photography returning from tough overseas assignments, a trouble man. This would benefit from an edit.
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